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The balloons rub together,
I feel your knees
the navy dark, skimmed fishes
we bend and laugh.

The dog with splatter feet,
I ebb into the room
and take your sidelongs
the surprising eyes -

knowing they are dark and
honest and drenched;
a mouth of alcohol slips
into the place of a kiss.
©2009 ~ottersandsky
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:iconpixiespoisonedpen:
"a mouth of alcohol slips
into the place of a kiss."

Wonderful

:heart:

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Knock on the sky and listen to the sound. ~Zen Saying

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an antique arms and armor expert
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I ebb into the room
and take your sidelongs
the surprising eyes -

knowing they are dark and
honest and drenched;


my favorite bit :)

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"...the great tragedy of the world is not that people suffer, but how much they miss when they suffer. Nothing is quite as depressing as wasted pain, agony without an ultimate meaning or purpose." ~Fulton Sheen
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Hrm, bent fishes.

Sidelongs?

--
Brecht- Because things are the way they are, things will not stay the way they are
Fallout 2 - Destruction of the Enclave erased all trace of President Richardson from history. Now the title of President is used simply as a bogeyman to frighten children
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I feel your knees
the navy dark, skimmed fishes
we bend and laugh.


This alone could be a haiku.
Thought - should there be an 'in' after 'knees'?

I am also fond of

I ebb into the room
and take your sidelongs
the surprising eyes -

knowing they are dark and
honest and drenched;
a mouth of alcohol slips
into the place of a kiss.

:heart:

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