I love your distance,
and the spite of time which
promises you to me
your low voice, a barn owl
and my little heart at one-seventy
in your claws
you save me,
we save
all the currency for
later, the only
modern frugal kids
but God, those coins
burn holes in our pockets dont they
sometimes love.
There are low, sinuous promises
of mythological sin;
a snake laughs in the grass,
pistol-writhing and
opening its hell teeth
til I hear you crush its head with
the edge of a shovel,
and you are shouting beautiful names
we have never heard.
A baby artichoke heart
presses into my womb it is the
personification
of our touching foreheads,
held knees and
swallowed seawater,
how you pull lunar strings
and get us out of the rip.
We have a black earthy garden
it slithers with green and tendrils,
the soils tomato breasts,
cupped palms
words are consuming us,
and you say to me when we are
lying there
that when I smile and the sun
falls naked through the
atmosphere,
these things are only
seemingly unconnected.














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I think i like these lines best:
'a snake laughs in the grass,
pistol-writhing and
opening its hell teeth
til I hear you crush its head with
the edge of a shovel,'
The thought of your love squashing out any and all 'snakes', because they ridicule, harm you is touching.
Blatant sexual imagery, you just had to didn't you?
I'm left to wonder if you meant to connect this;
'how you pull lunar strings
and get us out of the rip.'
With this;
'these things are only
seemingly unconnected'
Sorry for the less-than-extensive write-up. Anyway, this is definitely a poem to keep for the future. I love it.
"these things are only
seemingly unconnected."
And yet at the molecular level
we never truly touch.
We need more beautiful names.
--
Brecht- Because things are the way they are, things will not stay the way they are
Fallout 2 - Destruction of the Enclave erased all trace of President Richardson from history. Now the title of President is used simply as a bogeyman to frighten children
At the spiritual level, we don't just touch, we melt together.
combined bliss and contentment and peace and uncertainty and excitement. all the best feelings.
you are a channel for the drifting brilliance in the everywhere-air.
--
'SHARKS DON'T SLEEP' a collection of poems by Eric Hamilton.
and my little heart at one-seventy
in your claws
There are low, sinuous promises
of mythological sin;
a snake laughs in the grass,
pistol-writhing and
opening its hell teeth
til I hear you crush its head with
the edge of a shovel,
and you are shouting beautiful names
we have never heard.
it is the
personification
of our touching foreheads,
held knees and
swallowed seawater,
how you pull lunar strings
and get us out of the rip.
We have a black earthy garden
it slithers with green and tendrils,
the soils tomato breasts,
cupped palms
(So, once again, I found almot all of it particularly striking, ha.)
--
[insert something witty here]
I love that you say for your lover.
My pumps are malfunctioning with it.
Pumps... plural?
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